This week for writing we were doing explanation writing you got to pick a topic of what you want to explain I wanted to explain how honey is made. we had to make a diagram and show the different parts of the think we were doing we had buddys to pear assessment with my buddys name was michael. There was a sheet that your buddy would write on there were two things they think you did good on and one they think you need to work on.And then you do that to them his topic was about why giraffes have purple tongues.
this is the diagram I used.
How honey is made
Honey starts as flower nectar.that bees get that gets broken down into simple bits of sugar bees get nectar by sucking plants and flowers they store the nectar in a place called the honey stomach and then when the bees get a full load they go back to the hive. A bee can take two minutes to do all that.
Kia ora. I am Michael from St Mary’s School
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you explained how you peer assessed and how you explained that you had to make a diagram
I learnt that bees can do all of that in 2 mins
Maybe you could make your story a little bigger
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Mā te wā
Michael