my speech

 This week my class was doing speeches.we stood up in front of the class and read our speeches out then they would say two things about how it was good and then one thing you try and work on.My speech was about why I think that take aways are better then home cooked food I put three reasons why I think that and then I did a video of me reading my speech.But when the teacher said if we made it to the semi finals she did not say my name so that meant that I did not make it to the semi finals

here is me reading my speech.

 

pen pale

 To day we had to make a note for a friend or family member it is called a  pen pal. because we have not seen them in along time so we told them what we have been doing.I found it hard to chose with friend I would give it to but then I decided to give to  give my friends his name is jake.I found it easy to do half of the note because the teacher stared itv for us.Next time I would choice another on of my friends.

My author writing

 This week for writing we had to chose a author to write about I chose david walliams. We had to Write a wow fact, their childhood ,there adulthood and how they are famous I found it hard to chose which author to pick because there are so many authors a round the world.I found it easy to find staff about him.Next time I would chose a different author.

Here is my writing from this week. 

 

The Minotaur.

 This week for reading we had to read a story about a prince and a monster called the minotaur. The king was sacrificing people to the minotaur so a prince wanted to kill the Minotaur because he did not want any one to get sacrificed any more. When he had finished the maze he sar the minotaur. It was a big battle but then he killed the minotaur. But he jumped off into the ocean. 

We also had to do a wanted poster, I had a buddy that did it with me his name is Michael. We made our own person and his name is Snake Eye. He has weakness and strengths. We stared to do a maze but we did not want to finish it because was to hard. We also did one more thing did - a slide that my whole group worked on but some were away. Willow was only there for one day so she did not finish in time. we are learning to infer. Infer means to found the answer to a question that is not in the text necessarily. Here is the wanted poster. 

 

and here's the slide.

The luge

 This week for writing we were making a hook to hook the reader in to get there attention. 

Next time I would add more smiles and adjectives so that the reader would keep wanting to read more.

I found it hard to add in some thing that would hook the readers attention so they would want to keep on reader more.

I found it easy to use onomatopoeia in my sentences and  in my brainstorm I used a smile.

Remember that this is only the introduction. Does it make you want to read the rest of my recount?

 

Appreciation note

Recount Writing

What are we learning? Group 1 and 2: We are learning to use similes to create a picture in the reader's mind.

Success Criteria: You know you have been successful when you have written about: Who? What? Where? You have a beginning , middle and end. Use smiles in your sentences.

Remember to: Plan your writing. Use full stops, capital letters and paragraphs. If you cannot spell a word don’t worry! We can fix it up later.

yaha it was the ...Tairawhiti Kapa Haka Festival. I woke up and we had to go to school at 8. I ran down the hallway and woke my mum to Remind her that it was the kapa haka Festival.  I had my toast for Breakfast and then put my school Uniform on then we zoomed in the car like  a Cheetah to school. When I got to school some kids had black shorts and ta mokos on their faces the Teacher told me to put my black shorts on then get a ta moko from room 3. When I was ready there was a movie in room 2 called Hook but it was boring for me. When everyone was ready we met in room 2  the Teacher called the role then everyone lined up and we walked across the road.  We walked on to the golf course. 

When we got there  we went into a holding tent close to where little boys and girls were performing. After doing a practice we  then took a photo and brought our bags to the last holding tent when it was our turn to Perform I was Nervous My tummy had butterflies in it we walked up on to the stage we got in our lines.  We  sang when it was time for the haka, the boys moved in front of the girls, we were loud when we finished, we went in a holding tent and had morning tea. 

The teachers  said we were going to watch the Juniors when we watched the boys do the haka it was bad timing half of them were on the wrong bit we were exhausted we put our t shirts back  on and put our shoes on we started to walk back to school but then we stoped and called the roll and went back to school the Kapa haka festival was fun 

 

my weekend plain

 

Popping Popcorn

 

winter soldier similies

 

bradens holiday recount

 

mean boy

 

Maori greetings

 

the baking day

 

apple crumble recipe

 

Today I was learning about how to write a recipe

My new learning was how to make apple crumble

I enjoyed learning about cooking

I found it challenging to peel the apple

Next time I would change and make it slides.

MasterChef

 

Today I was learning was about the ingredients for food.

My new learning was were all the plants were in my school.

I enjoyed learning about what was inside the food

I found it challenging to Next time I would change some of the pictures

Only have takeaways

 

brainstorm

 Today I was learning how to brainstorm.

My new learning was how to persuasive .

I enjoyed thinking of some ideas .

I found it challenging to find the pictures that match.

Next time I would change some of my ideas.

cleaning up

 

Describe Work